Bad contribution.
Considering this isn't your first flash, you should have at least put some sort of effort into this, right? No, you didn't. However, I'll judge this fairly like any other flash.
This is a contribution to asdfmovie, a series of random animations by TomSka. Does it live it to it? 90% of me says no, but 10% says yes just because this flash IS random, but not in a good way. TomSka doesn't use stuff like that.
Good--
- Contribution to TomSka
- Randomness? (Judged in lightness...)
- Short (also judged in lightness...)
Bad--
- Voice Acting (Do it yourself, please.)
- Bad animation
- Bad humor, except for people who love those jokes
- No music for cutscenes
- A need for cock jokes. There is a moment for everything, but not in asdfmovie.
The sad part about all of this is that if a lot more time and effort is put into this, then this could have been a very successful tribute.
Overall--
This is a flash that could have so much better off if your crew had worked better on it. It doesn't live up to TomSka's original flash, but with more work, that could change. To summarize, just improve all around.